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A Color Darker Than Black Ver2 by ~kiwianimeangel:iconkiwianimeangel:





Like a bullet to the brain
I'm paralyzed by your stare
The cold deep pools of horror that are your eyes
Burn at my skin and peer right through me

Kicked away like a broken doll
Perfected flaws scratched scars into my skin
Like a maggot on a newborn,
I'm an unwanted atrocity

Cries for help are muted by my screams
A hopeless escape from my own insanity
So I lay here and wait for a hint of salvation
Whispering a prayer, hoping it's heard

A color darker than black
engulfs each aspect of my once happy life
Shattering it like glass as it feathers down my skin
Softly slicing my memories with a painful ease

Unwelcome lust pusses and swells in my cunt
So raw and tender is pulses from the hate
You not caring, as long as the pleasure is yours
Just leave me here, waiting to die

Eyes wide open, no time to blink
Slice me open and take what you need
For I am dead inside, no hope to be seen
So just let me rot, till I'm a color darker than black.
©2002-2009 ~kiwianimeangel
:iconkiwianimeangel:

Author's Comments

Hey! A sequel!!!!! Yay! I haven't submitted anything in a while. So i whipped this lil piece up. Hope ya like it!

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:iconbalancedvidiot:
nice...lovely imagry... the only thing i don't like is the "like a bullet to the brain" "i'm paralyzed by your stare" .... bullets to the brain generally don't end in paralysis... n e way, fantastic job.

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when i die i want to be cremated and made into various shade of gray-scale paint.
:iconsmashingblue:
Wow, this is really sad, and depressing and all that stuff..

..I love it Nod

It sets a great mood, and it's worded very nicely, good job! Love

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"If this world is what we make it, make it a better place" ~ Iced Earth - Consequences
:iconzpuppetmaster:
Wow!! I really love this one! This is my new favorite poem! (not that I ever really read poems) Fabulous. +fav
:iconmithy:
Wow... this is really good :D (Big Grin) and really depressing Crying
+fav
:iconhaste:
Damn, your drawing is so cool... I like the prose aswell... everything fits so well :D (Big Grin) very nice

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get ready to hit bottom :below:
:iconcalstylee:
kool, while reading it i tottally saw everything u were saying. (ew maggot *shivvers*)
:iconarpad:
A very raw poem. Strong words and feelings. U made me feel I could write again... :) (Smile) Thank you for sending it so that I could read it.

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JoãoF | DC | DJ | DF
:iconcats4dinner:
very powerful words you chose.... and the imagery is impeccable. very lovely, dark poem. =) (Smile)

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When life hands you lemons.... stuff 'em in your bra! hey, it can't hurt... :D

SILLY HATS ONLY.
:iconve:
really dark and really powerfull .
the words are skillfulled put into order to confuse and create thoughts
which its succseads in
Great work keep it up

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My place for art:gallery:

To do art without feelings is like making love to a hamster-
very hard

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